Took me a solid year to figure out how to end my short story

I had this idea about a person finding a door in their basement that only appeared on rainy days. The setup was easy, but I could not figure out how to finish it. Every ending felt too simple or too confusing. I must have written fifteen different final scenes. I finally solved it last month by asking a simple question: what if the character chooses not to go through? That one change made the whole thing click. It took me from November of last year to October this year to get it right. I spent more time on the last page than the first fifty. Has anyone else gotten stuck for that long on a single story beat?

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chen.fiona6d ago

My friend spent two years on a single fight scene in his novel, just trying to get the pacing right. He finally fixed it by cutting the whole thing and starting the chapter after the fight was over.

loganbaker6d ago

Honestly, that "choose not to go through" ending sounds like a cop-out to me. It feels like giving up on the story's own promise. If you build a magic door for a whole year, the reader deserves to know what's behind it. Leaving it a mystery just punishes everyone who stuck with the setup.